A critique: The opening 5,000 words to a novel plus an 800-word synopsis by Julie-Ann Corrigan (#100)

A critique: The opening 5,000 words to a novel plus an 800-word synopsis. The feedback will include annotated notes on both the manuscript and synopsis, together with a separate 3-page report. Julie-Ann is happy to receive in the genres: Contemporary psychological, crime, and suspense fiction, and modern historical fiction (set in the 20th century.)
If the winning author’s work shows both literary and commercial potential it will be presented to London literary agent Camilla Shestopal of Shesto-Literary https://shesto-literary.com who will read the submission.
Julie-Ann is a best-selling author of psychological thriller/suspense fiction and also writes modern historical fiction under the pseudonym, Jules Hayes. She is a freelance literary consultant for The Writing Coach https://thewritingcoach.co.uk