First chapter critique by USA Today bestselling author Lana Kortchik (#327)

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I will read and provide feedback on 5000 words of your manuscript. The first few pages of your book are the most important because it’s what the readers see first. Capture their imaginations with your first few pages and they are likely to read until the end. I will advise you on how to make the most of your first chapter. 
 
 
Lana Kortchik is the USA Today bestselling author of Sisters of War and Daughters of the Resistance. She grew up in two opposite corners of the Soviet Union – the snow-white Siberian town of Tomsk and the golden-domed Ukrainian capital, Kyiv. As a teenager, she moved to Australia with her mother. Lana lives on the Central Coast of NSW and writes historical novels about Ukraine.
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