Query critique from Cressida Downing (#94)

A critique of your first three chapters and synopsis. My report will focus on the overall quality of your submission, including an analysis of your style, thoughts on your plot and characterisation, and suggestions for improvement. Find out if your book is on the right track!

I’ve had over 20 years of experience in publishing and bookselling. I’ve been a freelancer for 15 years for a variety of professional clients (including literary agents, publishers, Reader’s Digest, and literary scouts), and aspiring authors. I run workshops and seminars at a variety of conferences and festivals. A passionate reader, I live in East Anglia with two teenagers, two cats, one lizard, and one husband.